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  1. Overlord Gameworks
    April 28, 2019 @ 6:29 am

    Yo, don’t advertise your channel on other people’s posts.

  2. Asuuki
    April 28, 2019 @ 6:41 am

    Nice inputs and thoughts, but…
    Okay, first and foremost, I feel you repeat and reuse words way too much… You mention the concept every 5 seconds, and talk about how it intertwines with the plot. That would be good if you did it once and explained it over the course of why you think the concept is good, but… you continue and continue to bring up that you like the concept, and for the exact same reason, every time. I recommend writing a script and then reading from that. That’s what I did in my very first, and only review. Anyway, it would have been nicer if you dove deeper into WHY episodes 9 and 10 were bad in your opinion. You also mentioned that there is a silver lining many times. Again, repeating…
    So… I’d say you did alright, but… there’s much you can improve on.
    Much love ?